In iron-rivet and
Heron feathered cloak,
Down rampage cloud edges
The hammer god is coming;
With drums of dreams,
Savage lights,
Bottled thunder and
The heavy Revenge Basket.
This night we burn the past,
Settle the retribution bones,
Rattle the rune stones, and
Fall headlong and laughing
Into lightning barrel futures.
Photo: www.wallpaperscraft.com
27/4/2013
The Hammer God is coming…woohoo…love it, fantastic imagery, fantastic poem…so evocative!! 🙂
Phew! Really appreciate your feedback. I am enjoying, in some deeply masochistic way, this poem a day challenge, but feel less able to trust my own judgement of quality at the moment; and I am concerned that I have started repeating myself, repeating myself.
LOL… well this poem was epic..loved it! 🙂
terrific metaphors! Every line is a turn!