Shall We?

Totally lacking confusion,

Simply and without fear,

A little rocky maybe,

But with good heart

With cheer;

Something almost recognised,

Slow diamond sunrise

On the edge of the new

In the territories of the heroes.

High-lord bright skies

Valuable echo’s reprise.

“Well, shall we do it …

Just one more time?”

“Of course, we must;

But as usual,

Not without change;

Not without a flourish.”

3 thoughts on “Shall We?

  1. Oloriel says:

    This was very fluid and very gentle, twirling towards the end into a burden (in my sentiments at least 🙂 ), with the word change. It shows, quite simply yet deeply that we must sometimes sacrifice, we must sometimes erase, in order for the sun to keep shining.

  2. wisejourney says:

    ..a feeling of excitement exudes from this for me..

  3. “In the territories of the heroes.”. What a grand place that would be. The verse has real pace and control about it. Not easy to achieve, but very enjoyable to savour.

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