It may be that I am not completely lost –
Or, indeed that in obsession,
This state is ultimately desirable –
But I am on a route of love-stones.
To one side water climbs,
Sublime silver grace,
Down sheerfall rock;
Knowing, perhaps that its
Destiny is circular:
Confident that it will return.
For me?
Two more nights will get me
To the consummation bridge
…
If bridge there be
And I am gifted two more nights.
19/7/2013
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“love-stones” captivated my heart. Such beautiful and pure writing. You have such a soft voice, when you write.
Floored and swoon.
Thanks Greeneyes; I am trying to write some lighter, possibly more romantic stuff at the moment. Reading some of my posts I seem to think there is a lot of “darkness”. So looking to try something more personally challenging, so your feedback is truly appreciated.
I can totally sense the change and the lighter spirit, visiting your thoughts and brighter moods. Im enjoying this!
Sublime silver grace,
Down sheerfall rock;
……6 words as one…..sublime
Fiat Lux!
For sure !!
Wonderful rhythmic flow and anticipatory elements to what’s around the bend~ beautiful ! Fondly Debbie
Thanks very much, so glad you liked this one: it means a lot to me.